Tout est dans la question, chers amis.

Enfin presque. J'ai des envies de tenter quelques lignes improvisées, pouvant faire l'objet de corrections, histoire de progresser.

Qu'en dites-vous ?

Si tu as besoin d'aide pour améliorer ton anglais, je serai là.
If you need some help to improve your english, I'll be there.

I even can bring next week a Harrap's dictionnary and give it to you if you need it, because I've got two of them.

I have a Harrap's dictionnary at home ! And traductors on line, hein. And I'm very, very, veryyyy happy that you can helping me ! Thanks my friend !

Is it ok ?

I am pas vraiment OK pour parler correct Englich alors que The langue Française est super belle....I préconise que the peaple qui speack cette langue de connards adopte notre french langue....

J'ai hésité et choisi la bêtise... Merci filouchon.

Petit exercice auquel je viens de me livrer :

With my friend and my cat, we went at my house, in the country, far from the blue ocean, but on the green ocean. This is an old farmer in the middle of fields, in the middle of France.

We walked on the country, we visited an abbey, we ate a lot (the speciality is goat cheese) and drank (famous brandy plum), and spoke and laughed. We played with Scrabble, and we photographed a lot of landscapes, faces ; they are good memories, now.

My parents were nice to see we, their house isn’t far that mine.

When are next holidays ?!

Correction (en conservant au maximum ton style) :

With my friend and my cat, we went to my house, in the country, far from the blue ocean, in a green one. It is an old farm in the middle of fields, in the middle of France.

We walked on the country, we visited an abbey, we ate a lot (the speciality is goat cheese) and drank (famous brandy plum), and spoke and laughed. We played Scrabble, and we photographed a lot of landscapes, faces ; now thry became good memories.

My parents were pleased to see us, their house isn’t far from mine.

When will next holidays come ?!

Merci filo !

donc aller à, n'est pas traduit par at, mais par to, si je comprends bien.
in a green one : tu peux m'expliquer steup' ?

Oui, aller à, c'est une destination, remplaçable par "vers" donc c'est "to".

"in a green one" évite la répétition, surtout que le "but" était trop lourd de toute façon.. Ça signifie "dans un qui est vert", mais ça sonne mieux en anglais que ça.

Oki, merci merci, filo ! Rendez-vous à mon prochain essai.

Quand on s'exprime dans une langue, l'essentiel, à part réussir à s'exprimer évidemment et éviter de faire trop de fautes, est de saisir l'esprit de la langue.
Je veux dire qu'il ne suffit pas de traduire mot à mot du français à l'anglais, car cela semblera bizarre à l'oreille d'un angliciste, mais d'employer une manière de parler anglaise.
Pour cela, il est intéressant de lire en anglais, de regarder des films en vo ou d'écouter la radio, histoire de s'imprégner de la façon de construire les phrases, très différente du français.
Pour être compréhensible, cette gymnastique est indispensable, donc autant t'y habituer tout de suite !
Filo-chou t'a fait une bonne traduction, mais je ne peux m'empêcher de mettre mon grain de sel...

Ro a écrit:

With my friend and my cat, we went at my house, in the country, far from the blue ocean, but on the green ocean. This is an old farmer in the middle of fields, in the middle of France. We walked on the country, we visited an abbey, we ate a lot (the speciality is goat cheese) and drank (famous brandy plum), and spoke and laughed. We played with Scrabble, and we photographed a lot of landscapes, faces ; they are good memories, now. My parents were nice to see we, their house isn’t far that mine. When are next holidays ?!

filo a écrit:

With my friend and my cat, we went to my house, in the country, far from the blue ocean, in a green one. It is an old farm in the middle of fields, in the middle of France. We walked on the country, we visited an abbey, we ate a lot (the speciality is goat cheese) and drank (famous brandy plum), and spoke and laughed. We played Scrabble, and we photographed a lot of landscapes, faces ; now thry became good memories. My parents were pleased to see us, their house isn’t far from mine. When will next holidays come ?!

We went to my house with my friend and my cat, in the country, far from the blue ocean but near the green one. This is an old farm laying in the middle of the fields, in the centre of France.

We walked in the country, visited an abbey. We ate a lot too (the speciality is a delicious goat cheese) and drank (a famous brandy plum). We spoke and laughed, played with Scrabble, and we photographed a lot of landscapes or faces.
All these moments have become good memories now.

My parents were nice to see us, their house isn’t far from mine.

When will next holidays come again ?!

J'ai édité ton message pour y ajouter les deux versions précédentes (la mienne et celle de filo) afin de les avoir les trois sous le nez.

For nice it gave an indication : nice is a personality trait, while happy is a feeling and is more
appropriate for this sentence.
So I choose happy.

Thanks for your version, my Blue !

Je me débrouille un peu, mais je crois que, après avoir lu les réponses de Filo, je vais m'abstenir au risque d'être ridicule ^_^.

Je n'ai pas eu le temps d'y revenir, mais je compte bien poursuivre, dès que... ben dès que j'y verrai plus clair, question temps.